refinement, not reinvention
The $777 copy audit
Make sure the words responsible for your livelihood pull their weight and convert the way you need them to.
You've tried fixing it yourself. It's still not landing the way it should. (Plus you're tired of rewriting your sales page every 2 weeks.)
You don't want to market harder. You want copy that does the work so you don't have to.
Buying from you should feel like a natural next step—not something you have to convince people toward.
Six things that make or break your copy
What I'm looking for when I read your copy:
You’ll walk away knowing:
10 spots available
What does a copy audit entail?
A comprehensive review of up to 3 key assets (homepage, sales page, offer page, or email sequence)
Line-by-line annotations identifying weak points, missed opportunities, and positioning gaps
Strategic commentary explaining why something isn’t landing
Suggested rewrites where clarity or authority needs tightening
Big-picture recommendations to elevate overall messaging cohesion
A clear action plan so you’re not left wondering what to implement first
$777
normally starting at $997
not public. not permanent. not happening again soon.
Next steps
Choose your payment option.
Pay in full or split in two.
Choose 3 assets you'd like to audit.
Sales page, landing page, email sequence, etc.
Fill out the intake sent to your email after checkout.
I'll review your info and send a simple contract outlining the details.
Book intake call.
After signing the contract, we'll schedule a 30 minute call to get to know you + your business.
I complete your audit.
And deliver my feedback line-by-line.
You implement + revise
Make necessary changes and close gaps in your conversions. One, 30-day follow up is included.
what clients have said
Danielle is the best and easiest professional relationship we have, She's handled everything from product copy and sales pages to full rebrand migrations.
She's the kind of copywriter who gets inside your head and makes decisions like you would. Except better. Six years in, she's still the first person I call.
k. Ross, marketing manager, hol+
What changes after an audit
Let your words do the work
Clean, positioned copy compounds. It sells while you're offline, asleep, or in the school pickup line.
Copy you can stand behind
No more cringing at your own sales page or talking yourself out of sharing it.
Close the gaps
The places where buyers are dropping off have a reason. Now you'll know what it is.
You didn’t come this far to have your copy underperform.
there's only 10 spots available so grab yours!
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Danielle Breen
7 years of copy + strategy
For nearly 7 years I've been the behind-the-scenes copy and strategy engine for fast-growing integrative medicine brands—handling everything from product copy and sales pages to offer positioning and overall marketing direction. Now I'm taking that same level of thinking and making it available to founders who are ready for their messaging to finally catch up to their work.
And around here, we care about conversion rates and nervous system regulation.
The right messaging changes everything.